my thesis would be that with human nature you will find that people are forgiving if you have came out of a tragic situation. the questions i find are those that deal with morality. How much can a person be forgiven for ? to what extent must the tradegedy be for the person to have a get our of jail free card ? Etc.
Monday, April 27, 2009
blog post #5
the claims i am making with my 2 texts are that human nature shows that when someone is in a tale of pain and grief or brought out of their element against their will like diaspora , we as humans will forgive them for wrong doings they may have made while in that situation as long as it was in order for that individual to survive. I use a story from the chicago tribune about jews and diaspora and how after effects of diaspora have declined the jewish past into almost nothing. information on past events and people in the jewish community have been destroyed and forgotten. this is just a refrence to how diaspora effects others all over the world.
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"There is a great thesis in here, and after reading your essay, I think that this thesis of "people are forgiving if you have come out of a tragic situation" could be more clearly explored - and also that you could also make some analysis as to why people forgive.
ReplyDeleteAlso, you need to properly cite your work, both here and in your essay writings.
Who is the author, what is the title? You can't just say, I have an article from the Chicago Tribune. There have been a 100-thousand articles from the Tribune!
Grade: 25/40"
*I had to repost this, because it did not post the first time I tried on the 30th.